ROUGH CUT

Here is a rough cut of our thriller opening, i am very pleased with the outcome of it as we put a lot of work into it and thought much about it.
I am going to post this video onto facebook, which is a social networking site that will allow other teenagers, which is our target audience a chance to see the rough cut and for them to comment and to see whether it would appeal to our audience. I think it is important to get feedback as you then know what you need to improve anything or to see what else you can.